tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2839241932481614660.post8336609513357649346..comments2020-04-13T05:27:01.629-03:00Comments on Practical Writing: A more complete introductionRonaldo Lima Jr.http://www.blogger.com/profile/14800077938694202627noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2839241932481614660.post-62884481750613002622010-03-14T16:10:43.692-03:002010-03-14T16:10:43.692-03:00Hi Claudio,
I´m Carla and I really like your intro...Hi Claudio,<br />I´m Carla and I really like your introduction.I graduated at CTJ ten years ago and now I´m back to improve my english.I´m still very afraid to write I hope you can help me.Carlahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04318007716821014921noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2839241932481614660.post-34655542088185589262010-03-07T18:49:38.196-03:002010-03-07T18:49:38.196-03:00Hi, Claudio ! I like your introduction even though...Hi, Claudio ! I like your introduction even though it's too long. You shouldn't have written so many details about your relatives neither your experience in learning english. I agree with Socorro when she says we need to find a balance between the information we want to give and how we give it. I think the readers of a blog expect to find relavant information about its owner rather than Marcia Pinheironoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2839241932481614660.post-77638280040307422392010-03-04T16:32:44.691-03:002010-03-04T16:32:44.691-03:00Thank you, Socorro. I agree with you that it is le...Thank you, Socorro. I agree with you that it is lengthy. And you got the idea: we need to find a balance between the information we want to give and how we give it. And we have to make sure the information is relevant.<br /><br />After other participants comment on this 'looong' introduction, I will post a final, edited version. <br /><br />Your comments are a perfect example of what we Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01236563856914608351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2839241932481614660.post-50794039523253073842010-03-04T14:13:57.472-03:002010-03-04T14:13:57.472-03:00Hi Claudio, it is good to get to know a little mor...Hi Claudio, it is good to get to know a little more about you! I like your introduction a lot, but in my humble opinion, it's a bit too long and too personal. Usually people on the internet get bored easily and won't read very long texts, even if they are about interesting issues. I would summarize it and even remove some stuff like the marital status of your sisters or the fact that you Socorronoreply@blogger.com