Practical Writing

About the Instructor- final version

2011-10-27T14:26:00.002-02:00

Hi dear practical writers! I suppose this is a busy week for you all and since nobody else has given me new feedback, I decided to post my final version based on your previous suggestions and questions. Notice that the difference between this final version and the 2nd version is the fact that I used connectors to link the ideas of my paragraph. The ideas flow much better! This is something you

About the Instructor- 2nd version

2011-10-25T21:28:00.003-02:00

Hi guys, based on all your questions and suggestions I have improved a bit my paragraph. That`s how it looks now:I'm Vinicius Lemos.I work at Casa Thomas Jefferson. I have been an English teacher for 16 years or so.I have worked at Thomas for almost 10 years. I work at the Sudoeste Branch.I teach children, teenagers and adults. I learned English at Casa Thomas Jefferson. I started when I was only

About the Instructor- 1st version

2011-10-23T13:41:00.004-02:00

I'm Vinicius Lemos. I have been an English teacher for 16 years or so. I've been working at Casa Thomas Jefferson since 2002. I work at the Sudoeste Branch. This picture was taken last year.

About the Instructor- 3rd Final Version

2011-03-25T14:25:00.003-03:00

Hello everyone, there are a few things I`d like to share with you about myself.I'm Vinicius Lemos and I was born in Brasília in 1976. I`m single and I have two brothers and a sister, all younger than me. I`ve lived here all my life. As a matter of fact, everyone in my family lives in Brasília, except for my mother, who lives in Florianópolis. I have been an English teacher for sixteen years, nine

About the Instructor (2011) - 2nd Version

2011-03-19T12:13:00.005-03:00

So guys, based on some of your comments and suggestions, I have added more information to my paragraph. What do you think about it now? I'm Vinicius Lemos. I was born in Brasília in 1976. Last year I traveled to France. I love visiting different countries and learning about other cultures. I have been an English teacher for 16 years or so. On weekends, I go to the park. I go running.Everyone in

About the Instructor (2011)

2011-03-14T23:30:00.004-03:00

I'm Vinicius Lemos. I have been an English teacher for 16 years or so. I've been working at Casa Thomas Jefferson since 2002. I work at the Sudoeste Branch. This picture was taken there last year.Questions: * Is the introduction complete? If so, what extra information do you think would be relevant? If not, what else do you think should be inserted? * How could this introduction be

About your instructor (2)

2010-11-02T19:01:00.001-02:00

I'm Claudio Fleury. I come from Goiania, I moved to Brasilia in 1994 to study Architecture at Unb, and have lived here ever since. I graduated in 2000 and decided to continue living here, even though I frequently travel to visit my family in my hometown. I have been teaching English as a foreign language for the past 15 years or so, and I've been working at Casa Thomas Jefferson since 2004. I now

A little about your instructor.

2010-10-27T23:29:00.004-02:00

I'm Claudio Fleury. I have been an English teacher for the past 15 years or so. I've been working at Casa Thomas Jefferson since 2004. I work at the main branch, Asa Sul. Before working here I worked at the Lago Sul branch. I come from Goiania, and in my free time I enjoy reading and doing crosswords, in Portuguese I must say.I really love teaching, and have been teaching and tutoring online

What about a third draft?

2010-03-07T13:42:00.002-03:00

After the last post, I decided to follow the suggestions and reduced my introduction. Here's the result.