Hello, this is the first version of my introduction. Read it and leave a comment saying what you think about it. Use the questions bellow the introduction to help you.
I'm Claudio Fleury. I have been an English teacher for the past 15 years or so. I've been working at Casa Thomas Jefferson since 2004. I work at the main branch, Asa Sul. Before working here I worked at the Lago Sul branch. This picture was taken there last year.
- Is the introduction complete? If so, what extra information do you think would be relevant? If not, what else do you think should be inserted?
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